Hi,
habe nach langer Zeit wieder einen Song geschrieben. Da mein Englisch aber nicht so gut ist und ich mir zu 110% sicher bin, dass in meinem Song Fehler enthalten sind, wäre ich sehr dankbar, wenn jemand diese korrektieren würde. Auch eine Meinung zum Song selbst wäre ganz nett.
Der Song besteht momentan noch aus dem "Grundgerüst". Ich möchte mich nur vergewissern, dass der größte Teil grammatikalisch und sinnergebend richtig ist.
Vielen Dank schonmal
The World stands still
That's not the life I dreamed to live,
everything's so complicated.
I need a moment to be free,
from all the pain inside me.
It's too much,
it's too strong,
I can't think,
what is wrong?
I want home,
I want away,
I want a place
for me to stay.
The world stands still tonight,
I close my eyes and start to fly.
Gotta run without a goal to find myself and my soul,
then I can be the way I am.
I saw my future in your eyes,
but you saw an other man.
you were my love, you were my wife
you were the best thing in my life.
(Now) I'm alone
in my room
thinking what
should I do?
Am I free (or)
am I caged
in the crowd
of my mistakes?
The world stands still tonight,
I close my eyes and start to fly.
Gotta run without a goal to find myself and my soul,
then I can be the way I am.
I won't keep you in my mind,
I'll just leave the past behind.
I don't need you anymore,
cause now I'm stronger than before.
And the world's still standing
and my heart keeps beating
maybe it's time for moving on.
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